Tuesday, April 12, 2011

Works in Progress Critique Project 5















5 comments:

  1. I really really like the miniature stage images! They look super real. Suggestions for some of the black and whites would be to bring out more of the darks.

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  2. love these- the tones are great. Maybe try to make a series with this stuff - very interesting subject matter

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  3. These are fantastic! You have some really good images to choose from. They have a great story like quality.

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  4. Great job! These photos are really unique =)I really like the color that shows up in the last one. And the dancer photos/the racing photo really stand out for me. As far as advice, watch for digital noise.

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  5. The strongest images are the first, fourth, fifth, and sixth.

    1- When I first saw this I thought of a Lady Gaga recreation. It seems to be a piece about you, with the materials/objects that were used. I think it's interesting that it creates a second identity by using a mask to describe your likes. This pose is stronger than the second image.

    4- I was drawn to this image because of the color and how abstract it is. I like the crop and that there isn't any context as to what it is. I would keep it in color.

    5 & 6- These are my favorites. I love that you have recreated how these spaces may have been used or made them appear dream like. Definitely keep them black and white. No suggestions for either of these.

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